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PostSubject: APEX Predator Tryouts   Sat Nov 17, 2012 6:44 pm

Unlike other species like Dilophosaurus or Herrerasaurus, most players tend to apply for a superpredator like T. Rex or Spinosaurus. To avoid having players abuse these powers, i have created this thread. Aside from the regular species like Velociraptor or Compsognathus, if you would want to apply for a superpredator or an APEX Predator, you will have to fill out an application, but with an added Writing Sample. This sample will have to have at least 200 words in it, have excellent grammar, and be a bit descriptive. Think of it as a big RP post.


You will have to fil out the same application, which is this:

Name: What is your character's name?
Species: What species is your character?

Gender: Is your character a boy or a girl? Male or Female?
Length: How tall is your character?
Height: How long is your character?
Weight: How much does your character weigh?
Coloration: What is your character colored like?
Body Features: Does your character have any distinguishing features? A scar on the flank or a large stripe on the back?
Present Age: How old is your character?

Bio: What is a short backstory for your character? Does it have a home or does it wander?
Territory: Where does your character live?
Favored Prey: What does your character like to feed upon?

But after this you will need the writing sample. Now, what counts as a superpredator? These count as one:
Tyrannosaurus
Spinosaurus
Acrocanthosaurus
Allosaurus

What doesnt count as a superpredator?
Albertosaurus, Baryonyx, Velociraptor, Ceratosaurus, Austroraptor, Majungasaurus, Carnotaurus, Metriacanthosaurus, and anything smaller than those eight. Velociraptors in a pack may hunt large prey, but alone they can only hunt small ornithopods, and therefore they dont count as a superpredator. Let the submissions begin!!

Kicking this sucker off:
Name: Hiroshima
Species: Tyrannosaurus Rex

Gender: Male
Length: 45 feet
Height: 15 feet
Weight: 5 tons
Coloration: Forest green with a black border running down the back of the neck, ending at the tip of the tail. Smaller and larger charcoal black stripes string down from the black border. Ten's of verying brown stripes dash the body, some intercepting the black stripes. Eye's are orangish yellow with round, black pupils. Underbelly is tan yellow with mixes of white and darker yellow. Tip of tail is covered in black.
Body Features: Multiple scars litter Hiroshima's body, some large and small; others three-clawed or two-clawed. One particuar scar was from a clash with a Spinosaurus named Nocturna. The resulting fight scarred up both carnosaurs, but left Hiroshima with a three-clawed scar on the right-side of his skull, digged under the right eye-socket. Another wound was from an Acrocanthosaurus named Malhado, a vicious carnosaur. Hiroshima was victorious, but Malhado managed to chew off part of the tip of the tai. It has healed, but is now colored jet black for some reason.
Present Age: 29 years old

Bio: Hiroshima is one of the oldest of Isla Sorna's population of Tyrannosaurs. Almost thirty years old, he has survived for almost as long as InGEN has been in business. Cloned back from extinction and raised in 1989 by geneticists and scientists alike, he was nurtured right from birth. He was one of the first Tyrannosaurus Rexes cloned, and was a personal favorite of Dr. Hammond because of his coloration, which differed slightly from other male T. Rexes. After InGEN fell into Chapter 11 bankruptcy and abandoned the facility on Isla Sorna, so did they abandon Hiroshima. Being a little smaller than a Albertosaurus, he was quite vulnerable to attack from his prey, or even larger Tyrannosaurus. Several years later, he managed to grow up to a mature adult, and was almost a fully grown adult. Now, he lives a life of solitude.
Favored Prey: Largest of hadrosaurids like Parasaurolophus and Iguanodon, and specificaly Anatotitan.
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APEX Predator Writing Sample:
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Awakening from black dreams and a deep slumber, a mighty Tyrant Lizard King was awaken. Measuring nearly fourty-five feet long, weighing about five tons, and over fourteen feet high, it was a massive carnosaur. It was Hiroshima, a vetran Tyrannosaurus Rex, one of the largest of the normal Tyrannosaurs ever to have lived. To his side, a decaying Gallimimus male corpse lay on the ground, maggots and flies already eating it.

Hiroshima growled lowly, then belched loudly, bits of flesh flying from his mouth in the process. Scratching his neck and chin region with his right arm, which had been badly wounded in a fight with a group of Metriacanthosaurus, he set off to find water. It had rained in the previous night, and now the foliage had been rain-soaked in water. The smell of wet leaves, damp Earth, and rotting wood filled Hiroshima's nose, and he snorted at the smell. Wet foliage slapped at his face, and flies buzzed around him, specifically at the mouth region.

Finally, he heard the gurgle of water from a small river. Moving trees out of the way, he snapped at leaves that were slapping his face as he rushed towards the stream. Small microceratopsians chirped and fled from the approaching Tyrannosaur. He was surprised; their was still a few of those creatures left. Almost running towards the river, he stopped cautiously, and began to drink from the river. Cold liquid filled his mouth, and ounces of blood littered the river.

Not that he cared, he thought. This whole area that he was in was just a rest stop. Because of the storm, he was forced to find a temporary shelter for the night, as he had been on a hunt earlier that night. He was too far from his territory, so he had to scare off a Metriacanthosaurus group that was sleeping their. That Metriacanthosaurus group was probably the same one that attacked him in his sleep.

Drinking peacefully, he stopped this procedure whe he heard bubbling sounds coming from ahead of him. He stopped drinking and looked with cold, reptillian eyes at the bubbles. He knew from his childhood that predators attacked animals that were drinking water, when they were at their most vulnerable. Suddenly, a massive Dienosuchus emerged from the water!!

Bellowing loudly at the stupendous reptile, Hiroshima roared at his new opponet. Taking in all his measurements from rough estimates, he now knew the reptile was the same size as him, probably weighed more than him, and was obviously shorter than him. Easy challenge, he thought in his small brain. Stomping his feet, Hiroshima roared loudly as the Dienosuchus snapped his jaws rapidly; a common trait for crocodillians.

Not hesitating, Hiroshima charged at the reptile, jumped up high in the air; almost seven feet, and crushed the reptile with his feet alone. Squealing in immense pain, the reptile tried in vein to clamp his toothy jaws in the Tyrannosaur's leg, but to no avail. Using his massive jaws, Hiroshima grabbed the Dienosuchus by the neck, crushed with over fur tons of pressure, and tore the neck off the massive reptile. Swallowing the piece in two bites, he walked off with one thing in his mind which he knew with certanity.

What a rude awakening.

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Name: Malhado
Species: Acrocanthosaurus Atokensis

Gender: Male
Length: 45 feet
Height: 15.9 feet
Weight: 6 tons
Coloration: Various shades of light and dark green with crooked, black striping shaped like a very loose honeycomb figure. Underbelly is light greenish yellow with shades of pale white. Eye's are either green or brown with slitted, black pupils. Small sail on the back is vibrant yellowish red with small, jagged black stripes.
Body Features: None, except for a fading coloration and a three-clawed scar under his right eye socket.
Present Age: 29.8 years old

Bio: Malhado is a savage killer, and he earned that title right from birth. Shortly after being born, his mother was out on a hunt for food for the chicks. After several minutes, Mahlado became impatient, and ended up killing his unhatched siblings. When the mother returned, she came back to a murder scene; eggs shattered, yolk sinking into the ground, and one remaining chick with blood on his jaws. From that point on, Malhado was a born killer. After reaching adolescense, he left his mother and the nest foreverm\, and began to seek a territory. He had tried many homes in the past, but he had been scared off by larger predators. He tried to fight back, but i's quite hard fending against a bull Tyrannosaurus when your only the size of a Gorgosaurus. Several short years later, he had finally found a suitable home near the Delta Compounds. Not too far from the facilities of the compound, he had marked his territory to where not even Giganotosaurus would enter. Their, he had made his home, and he would defend it to this day.
Territory: Wander's area's of the Game Trail, but he does claim a home in the Delta Compounds.
Favored Prey: Hadrosaurids like Iguanodon and Parasaurolophus to small sauropods like Seismosaurus.

APEX Predator Writing Sample:
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A deep rumbling sound echoed across the silent clearing in the Embryonic Complex. It was midnight, and most of the local dinosaurs were fast asleep, but some were still wide awake, like the constantly active Troodon, and with the occasional insomnia-suffering Compsognathus. The rumbling stopped, and quiet filled the area, with the exception of the chrips of crickets and the shrieks of Pteranodons in the night sky.

Suddenly, a loud, continuous shriek filled the air. With one reptillian eye groggily waking up, Malhado slowly awoked from a deep slumber. Carefully standing up on his own two feet, he swiveled his skull around, the shriek still filled the air, breaking the peaceful silence. He would not tolerate this. Raising his head up into the night sky, Malhado bellowed into the cold air, the sound echoing across the island.

The shrieking stopped abruptly. Snorting in happiness, Malhado sat back down in the soft patch of warm grass, absorbing the comforting heat like a baby in a crib. But just as he was about to fall back into black dreams, the skriek filled the air again.

Growling, he looked around. In the distance was the source of the sound; a male Ornitholestes. Snarling quietly, he propped himself back up, and started to watch the Ornitholestes as it continued to cry into the sky, like a crying baby. Running at full speed, with his head down and jaws wide open, Malhado charged at the Ornitholestes. It looked quickly at the newcomer, then started to flee in panic.

It was no match for Malhado.

Lifting the body up in his skull, he shook it violently like a ragdoll, snapping ribs like twigs, and ending the poor saps life. With the carcass at his feet, Malhado picked up the body, and chucked it across the Jungle, sending it landing in a pile of sharp twigs, enpaling it on the sticks. After retreating back to his home, Malhado sat back down on the soft patch of grass, and fell back to sleep.

Like a bad comedy, the shrieking filled the air again.

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PostSubject: Re: APEX Predator Tryouts   Fri Dec 14, 2012 7:27 pm

Name: Polar
Species: Spinosaurus
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Height: 26 feet
Length: 61 feet
Weight: 9.6 tons
Coloration: Brown mottling, just like in the movie, with a white stripe over top of a red stripe, and one white stripe under the red one. Everything else about her is just like the movie.
Bio: Polar was born in a clutch of two Spinosaur chicks. Both chicks were female. She only had her mother once she hatched. Her father died from an attack from a Tyrannosaurus Rex. Her mother had to teach the two offspring how to hunt, fish, do the female part of the spinosaur courtship dance. Her sibling died after her mother died, so Polar has bee non her own ever since. She patrols around, looking for a mate.

APEX Predator Writing Sample:
Polar walked into the sunlight. The rays blinded her large Spinosaur eyes for a second until she could get used to the new found light. She had just come out of a forest in the Delta Compounds region of this place she called home. A place called Isla Sorna. Or at least that is what the creators used to call it. (51 words)

As she walked into the open field, she spotted a small herd of Parasaurs. Easy pickings, she thought. She knew that the prey had seen her, but that didn't discourage her from making them run for their lives. So, she roared as loud as she could, startling the small herd, then proceeded to attack a weak juvenile that belonged to the only mated pair in the herd. She closed in on the prey, seeing its face. it looked as if it was begging for mercy, but spinosaurs don't speak parasaur. She lowered her head while still running, and grabbed the youngling's leg. it fell down hard. That almost killed the Parasaur but thinking of the delicious meat inside, she teared open the thigh first, and started her meal. (128 words)

When Polar finished off her Parasaur meal, she thought of her mother and her sister. They had both died so close together in time. Her mother died one day, then her sister the next. She was the only family member she had. But every time she thought about her deceased family, she thought of maybe finding a mate one day. All such lovely dreams, she thought. (66 words)

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PostSubject: Re: APEX Predator Tryouts   Fri Dec 14, 2012 7:35 pm

Polar's coloration is close enough to the movie standard. You might have to change the coloration once the field guide standard is up. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: APEX Predator Tryouts   Sat Dec 15, 2012 12:27 am

KillerVelociraptor wrote:
Name: Polar
Species: Spinosaurus
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Height: 26 feet
Length: 61 feet
Weight: 9.6 tons
Coloration: Brown mottling, just like in the movie, with a white stripe over top of a red stripe, and one white stripe under the red one. Everything else about her is just like the movie.
Bio: Polar was born in a clutch of two Spinosaur chicks. Both chicks were female. She only had her mother once she hatched. Her father died from an attack from a Tyrannosaurus Rex. Her mother had to teach the two offspring how to hunt, fish, do the female part of the spinosaur courtship dance. Her sibling died after her mother died, so Polar has bee non her own ever since. She patrols around, looking for a mate.

APEX Predator Writing Sample:
Polar walked into the sunlight. The rays blinded her large Spinosaur eyes for a second until she could get used to the new found light. She had just come out of a forest in the Delta Compounds region of this place she called home. A place called Isla Sorna. Or at least that is what the creators used to call it. (51 words)

As she walked into the open field, she spotted a small herd of Parasaurs. Easy pickings, she thought. She knew that the prey had seen her, but that didn't discourage her from making them run for their lives. So, she roared as loud as she could, startling the small herd, then proceeded to attack a weak juvenile that belonged to the only mated pair in the herd. She closed in on the prey, seeing its face. it looked as if it was begging for mercy, but spinosaurs don't speak parasaur. She lowered her head while still running, and grabbed the youngling's leg. it fell down hard. That almost killed the Parasaur but thinking of the delicious meat inside, she teared open the thigh first, and started her meal. (128 words)

When Polar finished off her Parasaur meal, she thought of her mother and her sister. They had both died so close together in time. Her mother died one day, then her sister the next. She was the only family member she had. But every time she thought about her deceased family, she thought of maybe finding a mate one day. All such lovely dreams, she thought. (66 words)

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From what i see in the coloration and my current writing for the Spinosaurus submission, your fine for this. May want to update the coloration as the submission is posted. Wink
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